Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends.
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(12-09-2010, 05:21 AM)Todd Wrote:  No Worries Jack I fixed it for you:

Jettle down, the nursemaid’s here,
Oh if only that could workBig Grin

(12-09-2010, 05:21 AM)Todd Wrote:  These lines were very cool by the way:

Screeching like an injured cat,
The skull a shattered pine cradle.
ThanksSmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 11-29-2010, 03:50 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-08-2010, 09:46 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by heslopian - 12-09-2010, 09:08 AM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 06:36 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 09:56 PM



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