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Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends.

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12-09-2010, 09:08 AM

(12-09-2010, 05:21 AM)Todd Wrote: No Worries Jack I fixed it for you:

Jettle down, the nursemaid’s here,

Oh if only that could work Big Grin

Big Grin

(12-09-2010, 05:21 AM)Todd Wrote: These lines were very cool by the way:

Screeching like an injured cat,
The skull a shattered pine cradle.

Thanks

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Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 11-29-2010, 03:50 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Todd - 12-01-2010, 07:53 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 12-01-2010, 08:42 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 12-02-2010, 06:49 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Todd - 12-03-2010, 05:25 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 12-03-2010, 05:51 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Todd - 12-03-2010, 06:51 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-08-2010, 09:46 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by heslopian - 12-08-2010, 11:05 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 12-09-2010, 09:16 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by heslopian - 12-09-2010, 12:01 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Todd - 12-09-2010, 12:57 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 12-09-2010, 09:20 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by heslopian - 12-09-2010, 05:17 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Todd - 12-09-2010, 05:21 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by heslopian - 12-09-2010, 09:08 AM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 06:36 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 09:56 PM

RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Todd - 12-09-2010, 11:52 PM

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