Water Margin.
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A witty and pleasent poem, like an intelligent limerick. The way you constructed the lines to rhyme "fen" and "Zen" whilst maintaining the rhythm was inspired.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Water Margin. - by billy - 11-29-2010, 05:11 PM
RE: Water Margin. - by heslopian - 11-29-2010, 07:51 PM
RE: Water Margin. - by billy - 12-02-2010, 08:40 AM
RE: Water Margin. - by srijantje - 12-02-2010, 12:45 PM
RE: Water Margin. - by billy - 12-03-2010, 08:59 AM
RE: Water Margin. - by addy - 12-03-2010, 01:19 PM
RE: Water Margin. - by billy - 12-04-2010, 05:02 AM



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