Experimental Prose Poem
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Thank you for the feedback and kind words, ToddSmile I like your alternatives to "houses"; I'll replace it with "shanties" once I've finished this.
I agree with you about the shutters and the porches, but I like the image so much that I'm not willing to sacrifice it for cohesion haha.
Thanks again for your lovely responseSmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Experimental Prose Poem - by heslopian - 11-20-2010, 09:58 AM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by Touchstone - 11-20-2010, 10:58 AM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by heslopian - 11-20-2010, 01:37 PM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by billy - 11-20-2010, 01:40 PM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by heslopian - 11-20-2010, 01:51 PM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by Todd - 11-22-2010, 12:27 AM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by heslopian - 11-22-2010, 03:13 AM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by Touchstone - 11-22-2010, 07:12 AM
RE: Experimental Prose Poem - by heslopian - 11-22-2010, 08:11 AM



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