She's not perfect
#5
hey michelle,

if ever you want input on a poem just post it in the workshop and say how much help or what kind of help you're looking for.
just expect a few partial rewrites as examples of what people are trying to say.

i know the crit in this section of the forum can be daunting, just pick one or two points from what you get and work on them.
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Messages In This Thread
She's not perfect - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 11:37 AM
RE: She's not perfect - by billy - 11-19-2010, 12:07 PM
RE: She's not perfect - by LiteraryAntiquity - 11-19-2010, 12:25 PM
RE: She's not perfect - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 09:36 PM
RE: She's not perfect - by LiteraryAntiquity - 11-21-2010, 01:16 AM
RE: She's not perfect - by billy - 11-20-2010, 01:45 PM
RE: She's not perfect - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-21-2010, 08:52 AM



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