Written Whilst Eating at a College Cafe
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Thank you for the feedback, LawrenceSmile. The "depressives" line you mention refers to a specific kind of pain, associated with anxiety, which people suffering from mental illness feel; but yeah, that line is too vague and esoteric. I'll have a think about how it can be changed.
Thanks again for the feedback and also your kind wordsSmile.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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RE: Written Whilst Eating at a College Cafe - by Lawrence - 11-17-2010, 02:10 PM
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