Poetry Teacher
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she and it are delightful.

lots to like here for me.

the images especially;
Lines 1 through 5
and lines 8 through 16


I bet. She has: for me doesn't work that well and makes me falter
enough to break the flow of another wise excellent read.
thanks jack.



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Poetry Teacher - by heslopian - 11-09-2010, 07:27 AM
RE: Poetry Teacher - by billy - 11-09-2010, 08:15 AM
RE: Poetry Teacher - by heslopian - 11-09-2010, 10:12 AM
RE: Poetry Teacher - by billy - 11-09-2010, 01:31 PM
RE: Poetry Teacher - by heslopian - 11-10-2010, 12:13 AM



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