10-28-2010, 10:44 AM
as the mist that once rose. would;
as the red mist that once rose. (i'm presuming the poems about anger)
The blood was a whisper
beneath the soil
and
Until I held the world
under water, matching murder
drop-for-drop
are for me, excellent lines.
i can see the poem ending after drop.
a nice compact piece of writing
thanks for the read.
as the red mist that once rose. (i'm presuming the poems about anger)
The blood was a whisper
beneath the soil
and
Until I held the world
under water, matching murder
drop-for-drop
are for me, excellent lines.
i can see the poem ending after drop.
a nice compact piece of writing
thanks for the read.