10-22-2010, 11:25 AM
Beautiful poems, and they work superbly together... just loving the incisiveness and the truth in it, really capturing the feel and taste of a certain kind of experience, a certain kind of life. There's a feel and emotion to the narrator that really brings the poems to life. Love the repetition in the closing line.
P.S. "Philosophy class is the cure for gayness" is a classic line
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P.S. "Philosophy class is the cure for gayness" is a classic line
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PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?