Maybe It'll Be Alright

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Maybe It'll Be Alright

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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10-15-2010, 03:29 PM

And if I die before I wake, I pray the lord my soul to take

yes jack, very original
Hysterical

i think the first version better, for me it doesn't seem finished this way .

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Maybe It'll Be Alright - by heslopian - 10-15-2010, 02:40 AM

RE: Maybe It'll Be Alright - by billy - 10-15-2010, 03:29 PM

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