The stage.

[lizzyrose12]

Blank canvas.
Empty stage.
And there should be no rage, over shoes that will never fit.
And thought the spotlight will never shine, still the passion will be mine.
And the slowly fading symphony still plays inside my head.
Slowly fading.
Slowly fading.
And I shall wait, through the darkness of night,
And though (me and)my talents you will never know,
We will still be here, waiting to glow

well we're not professionals, but we do have opinions
we try not to give terrible reviews in mild critique

normally we just give general feedback in this forum but you asked so;
remove anything in bold and add anything in (brackets)

i really like this poem lizzy. some of the images rock. L3 is for me superb,
perfect even.

well worth the read. thanks

Thanks! What I meant by professionals is that you all have expirence writing poetry. I try to take corrections with poetry but it's really hard to remember them and use them in my poetry. Thank you very much though!