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01-21-2010, 09:53 AM

Great comments. Now that you point them out its faults are indeed glaring. The form of it needs a lot of work. And the line "stick needles" now leaps out at me too. Oh well, at least i know where to start with the edit

Much appreciated Billy Tongue

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Queen - by addy - 01-21-2010, 09:15 AM

RE: Queen - by billy - 01-21-2010, 09:28 AM

RE: Queen - by addy - 01-21-2010, 09:53 AM

RE: Queen - by NadCloutier - 01-21-2010, 01:47 PM

RE: Queen - by addy - 01-22-2010, 07:58 AM

RE: Queen - by Leanne - 01-17-2012, 02:45 PM

RE: Queen - by addy - 01-17-2012, 03:57 PM

RE: Queen - by Leanne - 01-17-2012, 04:22 PM

RE: Queen - by billy - 01-17-2012, 09:46 PM

RE: Queen - by Wildcard - 01-18-2012, 12:58 AM

RE: Queen - by addy - 01-25-2012, 05:36 PM

RE: Queen - by Leanne - 01-25-2012, 06:06 PM

RE: Queen - by addy - 01-25-2012, 06:14 PM

RE: Queen - by billy - 01-25-2012, 09:01 PM

RE: Queen - by addy - 01-26-2012, 10:26 AM

RE: Queen - by billy - 01-26-2012, 08:03 PM

RE: Queen - by Philatone - 01-30-2012, 01:34 AM

RE: Queen - by tectak - 05-01-2012, 01:17 AM

RE: Queen - by ficosdarkness - 05-01-2012, 07:40 AM

RE: Queen - by abu nuwas - 05-01-2012, 08:32 AM

RE: Queen - by Indie - 05-02-2012, 04:50 PM

RE: Queen - by Alden - 07-17-2012, 12:58 PM

RE: Queen - by addy - 07-17-2012, 02:33 PM

RE: Queen - by Paddygirl - 07-17-2012, 05:30 PM

RE: Queen - by Timmycom - 07-20-2012, 09:12 PM

RE: Queen - by addy - 07-21-2012, 01:16 PM

RE: Queen - by billy - 07-22-2012, 10:49 AM

RE: Queen - by heslopian - 07-23-2012, 01:52 PM

RE: Queen - by Aish - 07-23-2012, 02:50 PM

RE: Queen - by Indie - 07-27-2012, 04:27 PM

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