06-29-2010, 02:42 PM
i think it depends on the lyrics.
remember in most instances
its the music that give lyrics the beat (flow)
you also get a lot more leeway as afr as cliche goes with song lyrics
very few aren't cliche lol, so on that basis it's hard to fault a lyric for being cliche.
about, 2nd line verse 2 isn't needed
till i could no more
sounds really shit in a poem lmao
but in a lyric it can be okay.
in the real world the phrase would be written as
till i couldn't.
i think like poets have artistic license to a point
so songwriters have a let's fuck up the language license
dear in the 2nd line of the chorus sounds really cheesy
unless it's an old person singing the song.
same with the title.
as for flow, like i say, with music it can depend on many things as to how it occurs so it can't be commented on.
all JMO. as far as lyrics go i'd say it's not too bad.
remember in most instances
its the music that give lyrics the beat (flow)
you also get a lot more leeway as afr as cliche goes with song lyrics
very few aren't cliche lol, so on that basis it's hard to fault a lyric for being cliche.
about, 2nd line verse 2 isn't needed
till i could no more
sounds really shit in a poem lmao
but in a lyric it can be okay.
in the real world the phrase would be written as
till i couldn't.
i think like poets have artistic license to a point
so songwriters have a let's fuck up the language license
dear in the 2nd line of the chorus sounds really cheesy
unless it's an old person singing the song.
same with the title.
as for flow, like i say, with music it can depend on many things as to how it occurs so it can't be commented on.
all JMO. as far as lyrics go i'd say it's not too bad.