Money [Serious Critique]

[billy]

It was a quick jot down but maybe I need to move it further away from the cliché.

Is it all about the money?
The less I think about it
The more I need it.
Humanity's lust,
The root of most my evil.
The thirst inside me.

C'mon I need some critique and advice because I do intend to improve .

the easiest way it to show;

money? (no need for fluff, IE, is it all about)
more is less
greed is best
i need a fix

okay, it;s nothing like yours and it's not that good. but it does show how in a small poem less is better when it comes to the small words.

my 2nd and last line is cliche but i was rushing

the idea unless it's a flowery poem etc, is to keep it as tight as you can.