Money [Serious Critique]
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Is it all about the money?
The less I think about it
The more I need it.
Humanity's lust,
The root of most my evil.

I made this poem as a judgement of my greed. I wouldn't class myself as greedy per se but I maybe take money too seriously. Anyways, enjoy.
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Money [Serious Critique] - by mrmod - 06-10-2010, 02:42 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by billy - 06-10-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by mrmod - 06-10-2010, 05:55 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by billy - 06-10-2010, 06:10 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by mrmod - 06-10-2010, 06:25 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by billy - 06-10-2010, 06:43 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by mrmod - 06-10-2010, 07:28 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by srijantje - 06-10-2010, 09:46 AM
RE: Money [Serious Critique] - by billy - 06-10-2010, 09:52 AM



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