06-08-2010, 12:18 PM
Brilliant. That first stanza is just perfect.
I like the macabre element to it, the way it reminds me of a Houdini stage show in a not- entirely cynical way (or maybe I'm just imagining it)
I like the macabre element to it, the way it reminds me of a Houdini stage show in a not- entirely cynical way (or maybe I'm just imagining it)
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?