Yesterday, 05:18 AM
(11-02-2026, 06:15 AM)hylas Wrote: BorzoiSorry, I don't have much to critique about this one but I just wanted to stop by and say that I really like this poem. Thanks for making my day better.
Loping like a ghost along the wet black pavement,
the white dog is trotting on beside the gutter full
of moon-beams and blossom and delicate
orbs that are the images of skulls of mannequin
all leering like corpses from the sex-shop front.
rbamssy? rbamssy!

