Borzoi
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(11-02-2026, 06:15 AM)hylas Wrote:  Borzoi

Loping like a ghost along the wet black pavement,
the white dog is trotting on beside the gutter full
of moon-beams and blossom and delicate
orbs that are the images of skulls of mannequin
all leering like corpses from the sex-shop front.
Sorry, I don't have much to critique about this one but I just wanted to stop by and say that I really like this poem. Thanks for making my day better.
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Borzoi - by hylas - 11-02-2026, 06:15 AM
RE: Borzoi - by matsunosuperfan - 11-02-2026, 06:18 AM
RE: Borzoi - by busker - 11-02-2026, 07:18 AM
RE: Borzoi - by rbamssy - Yesterday, 05:18 AM
RE: Borzoi - by hylas - Yesterday, 06:48 AM
RE: Borzoi - by matsunosuperfan - 1 hour ago



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