Short Cat Poems (other pets welcome)

[matsunosuperfan]

shed leaves won’t catch
heavy snows —
cool air through cat door



(as always, crit welcomedJ

L2 and L3 do their job swimmingly
L1 feels a bit clunky by comparison. Shed leaves? Won't catch? I'm a bit too confused to be immersed..have to work too hard to parse the image/gesture

Thanks, I know what I want to say, I'll rethink it and try to get it across. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Ah! are we looking forlornly at bare branches?