Love, After
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woohoo, something to work on! Thank you all for taking the time to read and critique.

(6 hours ago)Luckieman Wrote:  I get the idea and it holds together, except I don't understand "hand over glass".
Thanks for chiming in, that phrase seems to be an issue, I'll rethink it.
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Love, After - by wasellajam - 11 hours ago
RE: Love, After - by Luckieman - 6 hours ago
RE: Love, After - by wasellajam - 14 minutes ago
RE: Love, After - by matsunosuperfan - 3 hours ago
RE: Love, After - by busker - 3 hours ago
RE: Love, After - by Bunx - 3 hours ago



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