Dangling Past Participle (edit)

[wasellajam]

I like how simple and straight forward this poem is I've written a poem way back when about running into an ex at the record store. I feel like in my poems case I said too much, and in this poems case the mystery and matter of fact tone paints a picture left up to the reader. Whatever meaning they prescribe to poem can take shape through their own experiences. Its a good read!

Thanx Bunx. I've been so wordy lately it was fun to write this. I put it here knowing it was one and done, no analysis, no edits, I'm glad you like it as is. Now on second thought maybe I should have put it in Basic for target practice.