Dangling Past Participle (edit)

[Bunx]

I like how simple and straight forward this poem is I've written a poem way back when about running into an ex at the record store. I feel like in my poems case I said too much, and in this poems case the mystery and matter of fact tone paints a picture left up to the reader. Whatever meaning they prescribe to poem can take shape through their own experiences. Its a good read!