Battle to the Depths (edit of Community)

[milo]

Do you think the formatting change had any effect?

it took me a couple of times to notice as the first few times I read it it was on my phone and I just assumed it was wrapping oddly on the small screen as it frequently does.  I went back and checked on the computer a few times as that is where I made my commentary.  I should have mentioned it.  I like it.  I think it gives a nice pacing to it.