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Battle to the Depths (edit of Community)
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01-25-2026, 11:57 PM
(01-25-2026, 11:49 PM)milo Wrote: anyway, as I always say - an author should be a poem's first love but not it's first lover  Never heard that before So, edit up. Still not too happy with title and ending. More importantly I'm not sure if it's more focused or just has a lot more padding. Grateful for any and all crit |
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Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by wasellajam - 01-25-2026, 07:41 AM
RE: Community - by milo - 01-25-2026, 10:27 PM
RE: Community - by wasellajam - 01-25-2026, 11:34 PM
RE: Community - by milo - 01-25-2026, 11:49 PM
RE: Community - by wasellajam - 01-25-2026, 11:57 PM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by Mark A Becker - 01-26-2026, 03:43 AM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by wasellajam - 01-26-2026, 03:55 AM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by milo - 01-27-2026, 08:19 AM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by wasellajam - 01-27-2026, 08:58 AM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by milo - 01-27-2026, 09:04 AM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by wasellajam - 01-27-2026, 09:18 AM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by milo - 01-27-2026, 09:26 AM
RE: Battle to the Depths (edit of Community) - by wasellajam - 01-27-2026, 09:41 AM
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