Breathless
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(01-24-2026, 07:59 AM)yourlocalaliyen Wrote:  
(01-24-2026, 07:56 AM)milo Wrote:  
(01-24-2026, 07:47 AM)yourlocalaliyen Wrote:  Yeah, so...I don't really have much to say about this poem except that I found it very moving. I'm a bit of a tree-hugger as one would call it, and your work just resonated with me. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what else you write!
Were there any parts that you liked in particular?
If I had to choose, I'd say the second stanza and the last stanza. Idk why but those two just live in my head now.
What stood out about those 2 stanzas?
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Messages In This Thread
Breathless - by tweetywrites - 12-17-2025, 06:38 AM
RE: Breathless - by thewilderhen - 12-18-2025, 09:38 AM
RE: Breathless - by tweetywrites - 12-19-2025, 02:25 PM
RE: Breathless - by whisperer - 12-20-2025, 09:24 PM
RE: Breathless - by Smiley - 01-23-2026, 08:22 PM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-23-2026, 09:41 PM
RE: Breathless - by Smiley - 01-24-2026, 01:09 AM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-24-2026, 02:35 AM
RE: Breathless - by Smiley - 01-24-2026, 03:24 AM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-24-2026, 03:31 AM
RE: Breathless - by Smiley - 01-24-2026, 03:38 AM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-24-2026, 03:45 AM
RE: Breathless - by Smiley - 01-24-2026, 03:51 AM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-24-2026, 04:13 AM
RE: Breathless - by yourlocalaliyen - 01-24-2026, 07:47 AM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-24-2026, 07:56 AM
RE: Breathless - by yourlocalaliyen - 01-24-2026, 07:59 AM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-24-2026, 08:01 AM
RE: Breathless - by Smiley - 01-24-2026, 08:09 AM
RE: Breathless - by milo - 01-24-2026, 08:24 AM



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