01-21-2026, 07:34 AM
(01-21-2026, 06:13 AM)wasellajam Wrote: I'm not qualified to accurately evaluate the IP but a few notes:
Thank you for checking!
There were a few "ands" I was forced to stress, in L2 and 3 they're close together and weakened the read for me, as did the lines that ended with an unstressed syllable. Yes, too many 'and's, good thing this is practice, pretty sure Nana won't be reading it...
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