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(01-16-2026, 04:19 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:Thanks, ray, I'll fix. Also, thanks for sensing any emotional content, I'm a bit numb. Appreciate your time.(01-16-2026, 03:50 AM)wasellajam Wrote:Such a smooth flow, it reads so comfortably; which fits the subject's emotional content to a T.(01-16-2026, 03:37 AM)milo Wrote: I have a difficulty demoting "friends'" but other than that no issues. It has the wonderful feel when the subject matches the form, this is the perfect type of subject for blank verse in my opinion and it is an enjoyable read.Thanks so much for reading, I’ll fix that.
( typo? "though the grove")

