The Blank Verse Challenge (Practice IP with me)
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(01-13-2026, 12:03 PM)Bunx Wrote:  I just confessed to the holy conclave
a Pope I'm not even on devine good days.
Smoking drinking chasing the hours we have.
Having issues being picked on by women in mass.
Assigned purpose I'll take a fucking pass.
Figure it out as I tear off this cross.
I'll head to the water and wash my filth off.

I've never understood how the stressed and unstressed syllables work. Did I do this right?
Well, you did provide abundant material for "corrections" and comment, which is one purpose of this thread (right?)

So, yeah, mission accomplished.

To start the ball rolling, syllable count may be a bit high in your l.4.
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RE: The Blank Verse Challenge (Practice IP with me) - by dukealien - 01-13-2026, 10:43 PM



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