Reflection
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(11-18-2025, 05:15 AM)dukealien Wrote:  
(11-17-2025, 05:31 PM)sun_sparks Wrote:  a heron frozen
fish soaring close to their end
nourishing my soul
Pushing nicely at the haiku envelope.  "Frozen/fish" seems discordant until it comes to nourishing the writer.
Thank you dukealien. I wasn't sure if it was a push too far tbh...
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Reflection - by sun_sparks - 11-17-2025, 05:31 PM
RE: Reflection - by dukealien - 11-18-2025, 05:15 AM
RE: Reflection - by sun_sparks - 11-18-2025, 01:54 PM



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