11-18-2025, 01:54 PM
(11-18-2025, 05:15 AM)dukealien Wrote:Thank you dukealien. I wasn't sure if it was a push too far tbh...(11-17-2025, 05:31 PM)sun_sparks Wrote: a heron frozenPushing nicely at the haiku envelope. "Frozen/fish" seems discordant until it comes to nourishing the writer.
fish soaring close to their end
nourishing my soul

