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dukealien Offline

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11-18-2025, 05:15 AM

(11-17-2025, 05:31 PM)sun_sparks Wrote: a heron frozen
fish soaring close to their end
nourishing my soul

Pushing nicely at the haiku envelope. "Frozen/fish" seems discordant until it comes to nourishing the writer.

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Reflection - by sun_sparks - 11-17-2025, 05:31 PM

RE: Reflection - by dukealien - 11-18-2025, 05:15 AM

RE: Reflection - by sun_sparks - 11-18-2025, 01:54 PM

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