11-13-2025, 06:07 AM
Okay, I have revised it again, hopefully those cryptic references are more clear now. I sort of agree that "endowment" is a odd way to talk about it, but, it is literally how he put it so I left it in. I liked the line about the flood but you were right, Todd, it did not really track as somethign Jefferson would say, Luckily the line above is easy to re-arrange so I had plenty of choices, not 100% sure about the one I went with, might be a bit too literal / dull?
The meter is still wonky. The meter will always be wonky. I have come to terms with this now. ::pensive::
The meter is still wonky. The meter will always be wonky. I have come to terms with this now. ::pensive::

