Jeffersonian Olympics (CW: Slavery, racism, white supremacy)

[Mostly Holy]

Thank you so much,that is ever so helpful! I have a blind spot for punctuation, when you spend too much time online proper punctuation starts to look wrong, but ofc I should have used it in this! I put it in, and just that alone actually made a lot of the flow issues more apparent. Your thoughtful notes will be a big help for the next revision. Now if only I could get a handle on meter ::pray::