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11-02-2025, 09:58 PM

I think you nailed it! Well done. Great work with keeping both meanings of "mate". It's subtle and well done.

Move within,
but don’t move the way fear makes you move.

-Rumi

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October Taps - edit - by dukealien - 10-26-2025, 09:26 AM

RE: October Taps - by Weeded - 10-29-2025, 12:36 AM

RE: October Taps - by dukealien - 10-29-2025, 04:34 AM

RE: October Taps - by whisperer - 11-01-2025, 08:26 PM

RE: October Taps - edit - by whisperer - 11-02-2025, 09:58 PM

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