Synthesia

[Bunx]

I enjoyed this poem especially after knowing the context of the title. I've have friends who have/feel?) synthesia and I definitely heard this poems tone as a conversation with a friend. I feel like my advice or wish for this poem would be more context. Make the poem come to life maybe by making this a conversation or monologue. Tell a bigger story potentially. I could cut and keep choice stanzas potentially. Either way it was a fun read. 
Thanks for the post