Sigils Signs and Clean Getaways

[palifan]

I couldn't read beyond the first strophe. The line breaks are entirely arbitrary rather than following a speech pattern.
The lines themselves seem to be narrating a story, but it might as well have been written out as plain prose. 
It doesn't become a poem if one merely chops the lines up randomly to make a piece of writing more 'vertical'.

Thank you but they aren’t arbitrary they are very specifically and intentionally chose for both auditory and visual presentation.but thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.