10-11-2025, 05:23 AM
I couldn't read beyond the first strophe. The line breaks are entirely arbitrary rather than following a speech pattern.
The lines themselves seem to be narrating a story, but it might as well have been written out as plain prose.
It doesn't become a poem if one merely chops the lines up randomly to make a piece of writing more 'vertical'.
The lines themselves seem to be narrating a story, but it might as well have been written out as plain prose.
It doesn't become a poem if one merely chops the lines up randomly to make a piece of writing more 'vertical'.