03-17-2025, 03:00 AM
(03-17-2025, 02:19 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote: Clock in Clock outI think if you use commas in those instances, then you need them after 'friends', 'names', 'out,' etc. Either no commas or a whole bunch. Choose one. Other than that, I love it. Everymanish.
Zone in Zone out
New tables, <-- Here same worries
Same tables, and here new stories
Each day begins
Clock in again
New friends same places
Same names new faces
No one sees sun
Clock out days done
Same ways new worries
New ways same stories
Zone in zone out
Clock in Clock out
