I Still Miss You

[carahmellow]

Hey
It’s Me
I just wanna say that
I hope you find peace
I hope you don’t cry
when you think about me
I  remember that time
When we fell asleep
My hand in yours
Your hand in mine
Together forever
We stayed intertwined
I loved you too much
Couldn’t see the signs
And now that you’re gone
I wish I’d rewind
Right all my wrongs
I’d cut up that rope
From where you had hung
I just cannot cope
You were the one
Who filled me with hope
But now I know
My love wasn’t enough
I wrote you a song
I passed by your grave
It's been so long
Since I’ve seen your face
I wish I could take you
To all of these places
I wish you could see
What you were to me
Baby I miss you
You were so kind
Maybe I’ll see you
When it is my time
What I’ve been thinking is killing my mind
We’ll never see the sunrise
Again
Together
I look up at the starlight
And see
Your face
I been staying up at twilight
Again
Baby
I ain’t been feeling alright
I’m not alright
I got a question
Will you wait for me
On the Other side
I wanna hold you
Just one more time
So maybe in another life

Sometimes poems like this feel very theraputic... to not only write, but read too. Simple, to the point.. I also like the short lines and how I had to scroll to read. It added to the experience. I think it could be edited down slightly, maybe revised, just to play with some wording a bit. I think you could make this even better by making it a bit more flowery. Great work! Sorry for your loss. <3