Lies
#6
in the part that goes:

“ “I get it, I’m sorry.”
Authenticity was always yours before
It seems I don't know anything anymore
I’ve never heard your voice hit that note
Never thought you’d use that quote,”

i feel like the “i’ve never heard your voice hit that note” comes out of nowhere and sounds
like a macguffin in a way, only letting you rhyme in your next line without adding to the content of the poem
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Lies - by depressedmetalhead - 02-14-2025, 03:57 AM
RE: Lies - by carahmellow - 02-14-2025, 07:12 AM
RE: Lies - by busker - 02-14-2025, 01:46 PM
RE: Lies - by Bunx - 02-14-2025, 04:01 PM
RE: Lies - by depressedmetalhead - 02-15-2025, 02:31 AM
RE: Lies - by busker - 02-21-2025, 03:47 AM
RE: Lies - by midnightcowboy - 02-21-2025, 03:10 AM
RE: Lies - by Mark A Becker - 02-21-2025, 07:05 AM



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