02-21-2025, 03:10 AM
in the part that goes:
“ “I get it, I’m sorry.”
Authenticity was always yours before
It seems I don't know anything anymore
I’ve never heard your voice hit that note
Never thought you’d use that quote,”
i feel like the “i’ve never heard your voice hit that note” comes out of nowhere and sounds
like a macguffin in a way, only letting you rhyme in your next line without adding to the content of the poem
“ “I get it, I’m sorry.”
Authenticity was always yours before
It seems I don't know anything anymore
I’ve never heard your voice hit that note
Never thought you’d use that quote,”
i feel like the “i’ve never heard your voice hit that note” comes out of nowhere and sounds
like a macguffin in a way, only letting you rhyme in your next line without adding to the content of the poem