Admittance

[Magpie]

Hi Bunx, I also meant to comment on this a while back. But I didn't quite get it. The sticking point for me was 'grippy sock vacation' -- after a few reads I eventually googled it and... Yeah it all becomes clear. It may be my British naivety or perhaps I'm just behind a general cultural reference, but 'grippy sock vacation' left me lost. That said put in quotation marks coupled with Bryn's good suggestion of a title change would sort this out.
Anyway...

Shoes Back

"Grippy sock vacation"
is a phrase that puts - should 'puts' be 'gives'
a cute tinge to - not sure about this line
hell on earth. - could be seen as cliche

Admittance that you can't.
Allowance that they can.
Crying tears daily that
bring you down to tile.

Wear these socks for awhile.
If you want to stay in class
they could let you wear a hat.
I just want my shoes back.  - last two stanzas content wise are good

The first stanza is the weakest but the rest is good. 

Cheers for the read