Admittance

[brynmawr1]

Shoes Back

Grippy sock vacation
is a phrase that puts
a cute tinge to      twinge?
hell on earth.

Admittance that you can't.
Allowance that they can.
Crying tears daily that    Tears cried
bring you down to tile.   wash? clean?  add 'the' before tile?

Wear these socks for awhile.  consider removing the period and putting after 'class'
If you want to stay in class
they could let you wear a hat.  might?
I just want my shoes back.

Hey Bunx,
Sorry it took me so long to stop by.  Anyway, like I said before only minor tweaks if any.  I think the first stanza could be tightened but went round and round and could make it work quite right to feel it was better.  My only other suggestion would be to just be upfront in the title and call it "Psych Ward" or something similar.  My thinking is that a more direct title would contrast nicely with the tone of the poem.
Nice job,
bryn