10-26-2024, 06:00 PM
(10-21-2024, 12:58 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: The indica hits her different—Meant to comment on this when I saw it first. I think it could be trimmed like above and it loses nothing. The repetition of 'hope' and 'hoped' was a bit awkward. I like the play on words and the fact it's about weed.
it’s indiscriminate
and too often
takes away
more hope
than hurt.
She’d hoped to sleep tonight.
Cheers for the read
wae aye man ye radgie
