Shadows Self

[Valerie Please]

Ahhh! Well I look forward to seeing it restructured.

Xo,

Val

Hey Val!
Thanks aton for the helpful feedback, been meaning to turn the whole poem in couplets so I took the initiative. The original idea was grouping the ideas into individual stanzas to help the flow of the reader. Though on revision I think it's much better as couplets.

I went ahead and my the first couplet one sentence I think it reads a lot better.
I feel write pretty scattered at time. I like idea of my writing reflecting chaos of theme though it's so often not needed. I'm stoked you liked the poem I can definitely say the same of everything I've read of yours.

Your ideas about the poem are spot on I love that it comes across as that.