A Snack - Revision
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A praying mantis
scaled a knockout rose
snatching the intoxicated bees 
— Such hot pink tones and heady nose!

He grew fat feasting,
scaling up in size
munching at apiary apples
— His cold stare straight into my eyes.

Now you stare at me,
the apple of my eye,
the pull on my heart string,
the bee hum in my chest,
— Crunch, crunch.
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A Snack - Revision - by Valerie Please - 09-09-2024, 07:32 AM
RE: A Snack - by busker - 09-09-2024, 07:51 AM
RE: A Snack - by Valerie Please - 09-09-2024, 09:44 AM
RE: A Snack - by Bunx - 09-09-2024, 11:11 PM
RE: A Snack - by Knot - 09-09-2024, 11:14 PM
RE: A Snack - by Valerie Please - 09-10-2024, 12:09 AM
RE: A Snack - Revision - by Knot - 09-10-2024, 09:47 PM
RE: A Snack - Revision - by Valerie Please - 09-11-2024, 02:29 AM
RE: A Snack - Revision - by busker - 09-11-2024, 05:03 AM
RE: A Snack - Revision - by Knot - 09-11-2024, 10:54 PM



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