A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold)

A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold)

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05-14-2024, 10:48 PM

Thanks to all for your critiques.

As usual, when I start editing, I end up with a completely different poem. But I think this one more precisely relates what I wanted to say.

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A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold) - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2024, 11:12 PM

RE: A Sworn Statement - by Semicircle - 05-12-2024, 12:41 AM

RE: A Sworn Statement - by CircleWalker - 05-12-2024, 09:11 AM

RE: A Sworn Statement - by Knot - 05-12-2024, 11:46 PM

RE: A Sworn Statement - by busker - 05-13-2024, 12:11 PM

RE: A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold) - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2024, 10:48 PM

RE: A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold) - by Knot - 05-15-2024, 12:16 AM

RE: A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold) - by Wjames - 05-15-2024, 08:38 AM

RE: A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold) - by brynmawr1 - 05-15-2024, 10:17 AM

RE: A Sworn Statement (new title: Fool's Gold) - by armadillosarecool - 05-16-2024, 02:29 AM

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