Anticipation
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The time repetition works. Time Time repetition. Re- tick - ing


Mute Mutation. There is a sense of passiveness, of change. I see no conflict between alchemy and evolution.
Think about words. Al-chem. Chem is Egypt. Al is a prefix. Chemistry. Think about words. What do they mean?
Even if there is no connection between words, poets make connections.


Transmute. Mute means silent or still. nonplussed nonplussed, they mean their own opposites.
Trans, trans-portation, Train. To move or go beyond. Mute means to stay the same and to change. Mutant.

The ticking of the lover's engine
You're playing with that idea there.

The lack of punctuation adds to the poem by not being there.
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Messages In This Thread
Anticipation - by brynmawr1 - 03-08-2024, 01:42 PM
RE: Anticipation - by Knot - 03-08-2024, 11:57 PM
RE: Anticipation - by brynmawr1 - 03-09-2024, 01:32 PM
RE: Anticipation - by dukealien - 03-09-2024, 05:45 AM
RE: Anticipation - by busker - 03-10-2024, 12:04 PM
RE: Anticipation - by Knot - 03-10-2024, 09:47 PM
RE: Anticipation - by TranquillityBase - 03-11-2024, 05:27 AM
RE: Anticipation - by rowens - 03-11-2024, 07:51 AM



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