01-09-2024, 03:52 AM
Thank you so much knot! I've been under a dry spell. I am going to rework this one because I actually am proud of it for itself outside of any of my musical acts. When you say 'unnecessarily difficult' I was afraid of that, but that also gave me the enthusiasm to keep going, and the fact that it seemed to be working made it easier, I cheated by repeating an extra line within each sonnet for the couplet at the end, afraid I'd repeat some lines too much by the final sonnet, but then again they wouldn't be limericks anyway because of the number of lines.
so there's a million ways this probably could have been done, but I was making it up as I went, and the limericky feel has a chistmasy tone to it,
I tried to work each prompt into each sonnet and on reworking I can edit that stuff out as unrelated to the overall crown attempt. Hopefully the sonnets got better as they went.
Thanks for reading!
so there's a million ways this probably could have been done, but I was making it up as I went, and the limericky feel has a chistmasy tone to it,
I tried to work each prompt into each sonnet and on reworking I can edit that stuff out as unrelated to the overall crown attempt. Hopefully the sonnets got better as they went.
Thanks for reading!
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