Uncle Kev

Uncle Kev

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12-15-2023, 05:00 AM

I've put an edit up. Bryn and TB were very helpful getting this cleaned up. Is the addition of "slippery" too much for the tone? I can't decide. Any more help would be appreciated. It's not a great poem, but I owe it some time.
Thanks for your insights. Bang on.

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Uncle Kev - by Tiger the Lion - 12-08-2023, 12:41 PM

RE: Uncle Kev - by brynmawr1 - 12-08-2023, 01:49 PM

RE: Uncle Kev - by TranquillityBase - 12-08-2023, 11:16 PM

RE: Uncle Kev - by Tiger the Lion - 12-09-2023, 05:53 AM

RE: Uncle Kev - by brynmawr1 - 12-09-2023, 06:08 AM

RE: Uncle Kev - by Tiger the Lion - 12-15-2023, 05:00 AM

RE: Uncle Kev - by brynmawr1 - 12-15-2023, 10:14 AM

RE: Uncle Kev - by Tiger the Lion - 12-16-2023, 05:13 AM

RE: Uncle Kev - by Michaelpoet - 03-20-2024, 10:28 AM

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