The Wife

The Wife

Tiger the Lion Offline

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12-06-2023, 06:23 AM

A simple edit eight years on. But it's a better poem (I think) than it was 10 minutes ago.
I've been going back and looking at old poems. Many of them need simple tweaks that seemed like mountains at the time. Anyone else have trouble standing back from their own words?

Thanks to Todd and Keith on this one.

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The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-01-2017, 12:44 AM

RE: The Wife - by tectak - 07-01-2017, 04:05 AM

RE: The Wife - by Todd - 07-01-2017, 04:35 AM

RE: The Wife - by Keith - 07-01-2017, 08:16 PM

RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2017, 10:53 PM

RE: The Wife - by tectak - 07-05-2017, 11:18 PM

RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2017, 11:24 PM

RE: The Wife - by Bits - 07-11-2017, 05:04 PM

RE: The Wife - by Tiger the Lion - 12-06-2023, 06:23 AM

RE: The Wife - by Wjames - 12-07-2023, 11:22 AM

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