10-31-2023, 02:05 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-18-2023, 02:00 PM by Tiger the Lion.)
Luna, (tentative edit)
the self absorption
was inexcusable
I lost track
of your waxing
and waning
till my heart was aimless
and look at you--
your best face to the sun
and me
chest deep in dark
forgetting myself
forgetting you
again
Luna, (original)
the self absorption
was inexcusable
I lost track
of your waxing
and waning
till my heart was aimless
look at you
representing the sun
anyway
look at me
embodying guilt
forgetting myself
forgetting you
again
the self absorption
was inexcusable
I lost track
of your waxing
and waning
till my heart was aimless
and look at you--
your best face to the sun
and me
chest deep in dark
forgetting myself
forgetting you
again
Luna, (original)
the self absorption
was inexcusable
I lost track
of your waxing
and waning
till my heart was aimless
look at you
representing the sun
anyway
look at me
embodying guilt
forgetting myself
forgetting you
again