10-31-2023, 09:14 AM
Thanks Lizzie and FS. I wasn't going for anything as dire as a gun in the other hand, so I definitely need to rethink everything after l. 3. It was originally 15 lines. Maybe I cut too much.
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All That's Left - by TranquillityBase - 10-30-2023, 09:17 PM
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