The Five O'Clock Sun (revised)

[Knot]

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Hi Tim,

where'd the poetry go? This is very flat (though it does fit with 'listless')

By way of a nudge

Shade flourishes within a southerly breeze.


We will come out again
The dog and I
after darkness dominates
to celebrate the quiet night.

Once western clouds
have built their walls
and shrill cicadas cease
I will set down my books

and ...

(Bring back the deer!)



Best, Knot


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